[News in Level 영어 학습] 241224:The youngest world chess champion

LEVEL 3

Gukesh Dommaraju, an 18-year-old from India, has become the youngest world chess champion in history. He defeated Ding Liren from China during a 14-game tournament in Singapore.

Gukesh’s win was historic, as he broke the record set by Garry Kasparov, who became champion at age 22. This victory made Gukesh a national hero in India, a country where cricket is usually the most celebrated sport. When he arrived at the airport in Chennai, fans welcomed him with cheers, flowers, and posters. Gukesh thanked them, saying it felt amazing to bring the trophy back to India. Students from his school held placards celebrating his success.

Gukesh, who became a grandmaster at the age of 12, has inspired many young people to pursue chess professionally. His father has supported him throughout his career. Gukesh is only the second Indian to win the title, following Viswanathan Anand. He will be honored by the government and meet Prime Minister Modi later this month.

Difficult words: placard (a sign or poster with messages or pictures), pursue (to follow).

18세 인도 출신의 구케쉬 도마라주(Gukesh Dommaraju)가 역사상 최연소 세계 체스 챔피언이 되었습니다. 그는 싱가포르에서 열린 14경기 토너먼트에서 중국의 딩리런(Ding Liren)을 꺾고 우승했습니다.

구케쉬의 승리는 역사적이었습니다. 그는 22세에 챔피언이 된 가리 카스파로프(Garry Kasparov)의 기록을 깼습니다. 이 승리로 구케쉬는 인도에서 국민 영웅이 되었습니다. 크리켓이 가장 사랑받는 스포츠인 인도에서 그가 공항에 도착했을 때, 팬들은 환호와 꽃, 포스터로 그를 맞이했습니다. 구케쉬는 그들에게 감사하며, 인도로 트로피를 가져와 기쁘다고 말했습니다. 그의 학교 학생들은 그의 성공을 축하하는 팻말을 들고 있었습니다.

12세에 그랜드마스터가 된 구케쉬는 많은 젊은이들에게 체스를 직업으로 삼도록 영감을 주었습니다. 그의 아버지는 그의 경력을 전폭적으로 지원해 왔습니다. 구케쉬는 비스와나단 아난드(Viswanathan Anand)에 이어 세계 챔피언 타이틀을 획득한 두 번째 인도인이 되었습니다. 그는 정부로부터 명예를 받을 예정이며, 이번 달 말에 모디 총리를 만날 예정입니다.

어려운 단어:
팻말(placard) - 메시지나 그림이 있는 표지판,
추구하다(pursue) - 목표를 향해 나아가다.

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LEVEL 1

Gukesh Dommaraju from India is the youngest world chess champion. He is only 18 years old. He beats Garry Kasparov who wins at age 22.

Dommaraju wins the chess final in Singapore. He beats Ding Liren from China. He makes history as the youngest winner ever. When he comes back to India, people are very happy. Many fans cheer for him at the airport. They give him flowers. Gukesh is happy to bring the trophy to India.

Gukesh starts playing chess when he is a child. At 12, he becomes a chess grandmaster. He is now the second Indian to win the world title after Viswanathan Anand. Gukesh will meet the Prime Minister soon.

Difficult words: fan (a person who likes someone a lot), trophy (a prize for winning a competition), grandmaster (the best player).


인도의 구케쉬 도마라주(Gukesh Dommaraju)는 최연소 세계 체스 챔피언입니다. 그는 18세에 우승했습니다. 그는 22세에 우승한 가리 카스파로프(Garry Kasparov)를 이겼습니다.

구케쉬는 싱가포르에서 열린 체스 결승전에서 중국의 딩리런(Ding Liren)을 이겼습니다. 그는 최연소 우승자로서 역사를 만들었습니다. 인도로 돌아왔을 때, 많은 팬들이 공항에서 환호하며 그를 맞이했습니다. 팬들은 그에게 꽃을 건넸습니다. 구케쉬는 트로피를 인도로 가져와 기쁘다고 말했습니다.

구케쉬는 어린 시절부터 체스를 시작했습니다. 12세에 체스 그랜드마스터가 되었습니다. 그는 비스와나단 아난드(Viswanathan Anand)에 이어 세계 타이틀을 딴 두 번째 인도인입니다. 구케쉬는 곧 총리를 만날 예정입니다.

어려운 단어:
팬(fan) - 누군가를 매우 좋아하는 사람
트로피(trophy) - 대회에서 이긴 상
그랜드마스터(grandmaster) - 최고의 체스 선수.

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My Answer

A 18 years old Indian boy becomes Chess champion. It is the youngest champion in history. Before his record, the youngest Chess champion was 22 years old. As he returned Chennai airport. He is welcomed by lots of people. He became a grandmaster on 12 years old and his father has supported his career. He's the second chess champion in India. He is very pleased as he is welcomed by people. India ministry will give a price to him.

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Revised Answer

문법적 오류 교정

1. A 18 years old Indian boy becomes Chess champion.
→ An 18-year-old Indian boy becomes a chess champion.
정관사 "A"는 모음 소리 앞에서 "An"으로 바뀌어야 합니다. "18 years old"는 형용사로 쓰일 때 "18-year-old"로 수정되어야 하며, "Chess"는 일반명사로서 소문자로 작성해야 합니다.

2. It is the youngest champion in history.
→ He is the youngest champion in history.
"It"은 대상을 정확히 지칭하지 않아, "He"로 수정이 필요합니다.

3. Before his record, the youngest Chess champion was 22 years old.
→ Before his record, the youngest chess champion was 22 years old.
"Chess"는 소문자로 작성해야 합니다.

4. As he returned Chennai airport.
→ As he returned to Chennai airport,
"returned"는 장소를 나타낼 때 전치사 "to"와 함께 사용됩니다. 또한, 문장 끝에 쉼표로 연결해 다음 내용과 연결성을 만들어야 합니다.

5. He is welcomed by lots of people.
→ He was welcomed by lots of people.
과거 시점을 나타내므로 시제를 과거형으로 바꿔야 합니다.

6. He became a grandmaster on 12 years old and his father has supported his career.
→ He became a grandmaster at the age of 12, and his father has supported his career.
"on" 대신 "at the age of"가 적절하며, 두 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하기 위해 쉼표와 "and"를 사용해야 합니다.

7. He's the second chess champion in India.
맞는 문장으로 수정이 필요하지 않습니다.

8. He is very pleased as he is welcomed by people.
→ He was very pleased as he was welcomed by people.
시제를 과거형으로 바꿔야 합니다.

9. India ministry will give a price to him.
→ The Indian ministry will give a prize to him.
"India ministry" 대신 "The Indian ministry"가 더 자연스럽습니다. 또한 "price"는 "가격"을 의미하므로 "prize(상)"로 수정해야 합니다.

수정된 문장

An 18-year-old Indian boy becomes a chess champion. He is the youngest champion in history. Before his record, the youngest chess champion was 22 years old. As he returned to Chennai airport, he was welcomed by lots of people. He became a grandmaster at the age of 12, and his father has supported his career. He's the second chess champion in India. He was very pleased as he was welcomed by people. The Indian ministry will give a prize to him.

 

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Level 1 뉴스와 비교 및 분석

Level 1 요약 내용

구케쉬는 18세로 체스 세계 챔피언이 되었으며, 역대 최연소 챔피언입니다.
결승전은 싱가포르에서 열렸습니다.
공항에서 팬들에게 꽃과 함께 환영을 받았습니다.
12세에 그랜드마스터가 되었으며, 인도에서 두 번째 세계 챔피언입니다.
곧 인도의 총리를 만날 예정입니다.

요약 분석

정확한 정보 반영 여부
1. "결승전이 싱가포르에서 열렸다"는 Level 1에 포함된 내용이 빠짐.
→ 수정: "The final match was held in Singapore." 추가 필요.
2. "총리를 만날 예정"이라는 정보가 빠짐.
→ 수정: "He will meet the Prime Minister soon." 추가 필요.
3. "공항에서 꽃을 받았다"는 구체적인 묘사가 누락됨.
→ 수정: "He was greeted with flowers at the airport." 추가 필요.

최종 수정 및 보완된 요약

An 18-year-old Indian boy becomes a chess champion. He is the youngest champion in history. Before his record, the youngest chess champion was 22 years old. The final match was held in Singapore. As he returned to Chennai airport, he was welcomed by lots of people and greeted with flowers. He became a grandmaster at the age of 12, and his father has supported his career. He's the second chess champion in India. He was very pleased as he was welcomed by people. The Indian ministry will give a prize to him, and he will meet the Prime Minister soon.